All Comments on 'May to December Ch. 03'

by DawnJ

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sailandoarsailandoarover 11 years ago
Awesome ....

... exploration of relation, emotion and sex. Thanks!

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Even better than pt 2 -

Excellently done. I love the scene with the books in the basement :)

Great writing, Dawn!

mammoetmammoetover 11 years ago
Great

more please

DawnJDawnJover 11 years agoAuthor
Part 4

That will be the last part, and it should be up by the weekend.

dbdukedbdukeover 11 years ago
Dawn Please Continue

Please let's ride this to the end. The passion in your story needs to finish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Ending.

Dawn, I am really looking forward to a great ending so like your other submissions.Thanks so far for a great read,ciao.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
As good as I expected..........!

I knew it would rise to the expectations I had, and I can't wait for the last chapter.

DawnJDawnJover 11 years agoAuthor
Part 4 update

It will be posted tomorrow, January 20, according to the powers that be. Sorry for the delay, folks!

DawnJDawnJover 11 years agoAuthor
No way to delete idiocy! :)

Today IS January 20...sorry! It'll be here today!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
perfect

a perfectly delicious story!

AvidreaderinozAvidreaderinozover 9 years ago
Control

Me thinks that young Scott is a bit of a control freak, quite demanding actually.

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