All Comments on 'May to December Ch. 03'

by DawnJ

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AvidreaderinozAvidreaderinozover 9 years ago
Control

Me thinks that young Scott is a bit of a control freak, quite demanding actually.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
perfect

a perfectly delicious story!

DawnJDawnJover 11 years agoAuthor
No way to delete idiocy! :)

Today IS January 20...sorry! It'll be here today!

DawnJDawnJover 11 years agoAuthor
Part 4 update

It will be posted tomorrow, January 20, according to the powers that be. Sorry for the delay, folks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
As good as I expected..........!

I knew it would rise to the expectations I had, and I can't wait for the last chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Ending.

Dawn, I am really looking forward to a great ending so like your other submissions.Thanks so far for a great read,ciao.

dbdukedbdukeover 11 years ago
Dawn Please Continue

Please let's ride this to the end. The passion in your story needs to finish.

DawnJDawnJover 11 years agoAuthor
Part 4

That will be the last part, and it should be up by the weekend.

mammoetmammoetover 11 years ago
Great

more please

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Even better than pt 2 -

Excellently done. I love the scene with the books in the basement :)

Great writing, Dawn!

sailandoarsailandoarover 11 years ago
Awesome ....

... exploration of relation, emotion and sex. Thanks!

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