All Comments on 'MC-125 Ch. 01-11'

I just loved the way that you built up the story. It was really incredible,in fact it was the best mind controll/romantic story that has ever been written on this web page. Please continue with these types of stories.

Satisfied reader

Well written, character and plot driven stories that also have great sex... magnificent. Keep up the good work.

Not bad, i was really surprised as most of the Mind COntrol stories i came across were generally quite non consensual and certainly did not have any element of romance in them. Keep up the good work, it makes for a pretty good read

Truly unique and wonderfully told.

I agree with the previous comments by other readers. Herein you've shown rare talent and claimed a unique and welcome niche in the MC genre (perhaps as evidenced by your choice of making this a Romance category story).

A hearty "Well done" to you and I look forward to savoring your other writings.

Here's wishing you the best of all things and my five star thank you for MC-125.

Fabulous story! I hate to think how much research went in to it. Can hardly wait to read the rest. Thank you for sharing.

Great story but like most on here it has no ending just leaves you hanging