by LordRaven
Great story but like most on here it has no ending just leaves you hanging
Fabulous story! I hate to think how much research went in to it. Can hardly wait to read the rest. Thank you for sharing.
I agree with the previous comments by other readers. Herein you've shown rare talent and claimed a unique and welcome niche in the MC genre (perhaps as evidenced by your choice of making this a Romance category story).
A hearty "Well done" to you and I look forward to savoring your other writings.
Here's wishing you the best of all things and my five star thank you for MC-125.
Not bad, i was really surprised as most of the Mind COntrol stories i came across were generally quite non consensual and certainly did not have any element of romance in them. Keep up the good work, it makes for a pretty good read
Well written, character and plot driven stories that also have great sex... magnificent. Keep up the good work.
I just loved the way that you built up the story. It was really incredible,in fact it was the best mind controll/romantic story that has ever been written on this web page. Please continue with these types of stories.
Satisfied reader