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...TO BE CONTINUED.
- COMMENTS
TerraKhanover 7 years agoI hope the next chapter follows up sooner than the other. The wait was worth it though. Nice story
NightPorterover 7 years agoPart of me wants Humbert to get as far away from these bitches as possible. Another part of me wants him to end up with Leslie in the end. Great to see another chapter up. You write very vivid characters and a very compelling story and I'm looking forward to more.
Anonymousover 7 years agoI know this might be weird but I am kind of hoping leslie snaps out of it and she and humbert find happiness together.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoJesus, I really hope Humbert ends up ok in the end. Poor kid has gone through fucking hell, and he was too scared to get himself out of it. He's just an innocent, helpless kid who did nothing wrong and payed the price for it. If he ends up in prison, it'll be heartbreaking, at least for me. Maybe it'll be best to just kill him off; putting him out of his misery. I don't know. I guess I'm just so invested in his story that I feel like I need to put these thoughts out there. You're the author, Mondo. You have control here. Do what you need to do.
