All Comments on 'Mean Girls of Maplewood Ch. 12'

I don't care about that last comment; because the bitch read the story.

How closed to u think the story is to being complete???? I been enjoying this for a while. I wonder if u have the whole plot plan out ?

Please don't keep us waiting for the next part I want to know how this ends and some more details on what happened to Humbert. This story is a trainwreck of assholes I can't figure out who if anyone I like..... But I need to know what happens next.

This was great I can see thickening plot lines I love it and more importantly Humbert and leslie had a moment mind you it was a panic attack for Humbert and A tearful apology from leslie but that had a moment I'm rooting for them

this story is going along very nicely. 4 thumbs, and a willy whacker, all the way up.

I mean Robert, Brad, etc. can they get their due revenge on the ones that hurt them? It would be a fitting end.

Been waiting for a while and you didn't disappoint. Can't wait for the next chapter.

So was Humbert's face disfigured?

I really like this series. It's my favorite, "WTF will happen next" series. It's kind of fucked up but sign me up for Team Lesbert. Both characters are just screwed up enough to work it out. Plus, the romantic in me wants to see at least two people find some level of closure and happiness at the end of this.

I too, make no judgements about what is happening on screen, I'm just here for the ride. Can't wait to see what happens next. Don't keep us waiting too long.

Working on Chapter 13 along with a few other short stories. It's been kind of hard to maintain my writing schedule. I'd like to thank all of the people who read my stories. Your comments really do add fuel to the creative fire.

You keep me coming back month on month to check for more of this story. Your style is cinematic; I can see every scene played out beautifully in my mind's eye and you draw the story on with great skill. Keep up the good work, please!

I gots to know!

You remind me of G.R.R.Martin. Cause you keep doing other stories and I know that some of them were before this one, but damn it this a good story and we want to know the conclusion. If you finish it and can sell it on amazon I know I'll buy it.

i've got a pretty good ending for this series in my head, complete mindfuck. let me know if you guys want me to type it down and post it. its pretty dark though, no happy endings.

If you do that I will pursue you legally to the fullest extent of the law. WRITE YOUR OWN SHIT!!!

I'm not getting paid for this and I am having some problems with my computer and home life. The next chapter rests unfinished on a portable hard drive. find another story to read but don't fuck with me. No fan fiction on Maplewood!!

there's fan fiction for everything (even game of thrones). Why would anyone want to make any money off this? literotica is free for everyone, and no one here is trying to exploit you. good luck with the lawsuit though, and whatever's going on with your life.

This is the best series i've read on this site in a long long time (seriously consider publishing erotica, could be some good $ in it for you) you know that saying that all good things are worth waiting for? this is a good thing, i know some people are getting frustrated with the wait time, they can jack it to other things, take your time, handle your business, because YOU pump out quality stuff and honestly thats the important part, its a labor of love and i commend you for it. as always,

Hold your head high,

Keep writing,

We (your true fanbase) love you

#TeamLesbert

I hope your home life gets better... and your computer. Lol. What ever you decide your fans are with you and hope you can give us a good ending, cause so far you have left us on a hell of a cliff hanger and hope you are able to finish it. All the best, a fan

Adorable

Humbert might actually wind up with a super sexy, sugar mommy. I mean, 25,000 dollars is a lot of cash. Just sayin, you know.

What in the bloody hell is going on in this story at this point?