by NaughtyVisions
Well written. I can't wait for the third I installment....please make it soon.
This is a great story. I can just see the paradox coming. I can definetly see this story getting better and better.
Incest is not a genre I often read, but the title and description caught my interest. Everything about this is PERFECT! Well, fucking the nipple was a little odd, but this story has so many original, clever elements, it's almost too good for Literotica.
The first story was interesting and sexy, this one is clumsy and weird.
It is hot, don't want to think of the incest but the act. Love it. .. Made me hot all over wishing I was her and getting some.
I can't wait to find out what kind of trouble he was into and what he was afraid that he might do to her. He told her he used her love for him and willingness to do anything for him to get her to do things other girls wouldn't. A twenty year old man with that much power over a girl...
Hmmm. If she dies in the past, where she doesn't exist because she had yet to be born, that won't effect her being born in the future unless her death messes with dad's mind and his choices; right? If the dead body still returns to the future, there will not be a body or anyone looking for her in his time so he won't be looking at prison time. This is really the only chance where a thug is guaranteed to get away with murder.
This story is incredibly interesting. The first chapter was a great read, but this one... Fucking her nipple, really? Do you understand how "titty-fucking" works? Because that's not it. Anyway, I hope you change direction with that aspect, because it kind of ruins it.
but coming on/in her nipple/breast,,,i don't get it!
...I don't get the nipple thrusting. He did remember though and it was hilarious in part. I mean, you want her daddy to do her when the story's read. Interesting premise and I'm largely enjoying it.