All Comments on 'Megan & David Ch. 02'

What story are you trying to tell? Maybe going back to Junior High and starting with a story outline would help. In the meantime don't quit your day job.

Instead of telling your kids "no kids" you should be thankful. He has a cock and she has a cunt, and they are in love. Nowadays few incest situations produce dummies, and you should look forward to your grandchildren from this union.

I liked how the father reacted in his head, but then calmed himself down.

Please disregard the first poster here. If it wasn't a coward, it would have left it's name. But I think you did really good and I am looking forward to the next chapter of this awesome story.

But I wonder if it is a fantasy story or is it based on a true story? pm me to answer if you like.

Enjoyed this story more than any other story that I have read on this site. It was great!! Please continue this story, I would like to read more about Megan, David and the rest of the family. Like what happens to the sister Bea and what happens when Megan & David are at school.

Please, please, please continue this story!!!!

You definately need to write more about megan and david. This is very good work.