All Comments on 'Melissa and Alex'

by Sara_Bellum

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Good .

Love the way you got the pair together ,is it a real or fiction for you either way PLEASE MORE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Yummy!

It's nice to see a well written swinger story written from a female perspective. Keep up the good work. I'll be keeping an eye out for more from you.

StubbyoneStubbyoneover 6 years ago
Holy hell !!

That was HOT !!! Sheeesh !! I could hardly breath while trying to read this wonderfully sexy story. Great descriptions, but a few too many couplings. It got a little frenetic at the end. Sometimes less is more. Good writing though. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wow, how phony can you get?

Story rates above 4.3, which means thousands of readers read and liked it, and there are only 3 comments, in 12 years. And of course all three comments are very positive and encouraging.

Some authors can't handle the truth. Some even try to hide it. And some have to create one more fiction. These authors are only partially equipped to write about adultery, since they are experts at lying and cheating. What they fail at is honest consequences. One suspects its the story of their lives.

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