All Comments on 'Melissa's New Position Ch. 06'

I like the descriptions. It's really good, very hot. I'm trying to improve my own writing and this story helped me.

It came across a bit clinical and cold in this chapter

It’s pretty bizarre that they don’t talk to her, I didn’t really like this chapter. I enjoy BDSM but not this kind of objectification. It can come across as sinister, I don’t think this story is that dark yet. I think she might be happy in a D/s relationship with Ron?

Tess (UK)