All Comments on 'Melissa's Visit'

Awesome!!

My wife and I were in bed the other night and she asked me about a threesome and if I wanted one. I said I didn't know. She said she would do that for me. I am going to have her read this. Hopefully she gets as turned on as I did. Look forward to more.

Very erotic story and also very loving at the same time. I definitely would like to read some other stories in the same genre from this author.

Incredibly good loved this story hope to read more

Sucking fucking fantastic

My girlfriend and I used to do this sort of thing with our lesbian girlfriend several times a week for about six months. You got the emotions just right.

Especially the loving jealousy my girlfriend had when the lesbian and I finally fell in love. It takes a very special sort of girlfriend who is committed enough to be able to make the whole thing a loving experience for all concerned.

"Anything that will make you happy" is the sign of a very loving girlfriend.

One of the best stories I've ever read on this site: emotionally pitch-perfect and so sexually hot! Great read. Thanks!

I have to say, it is incredibly satisfying to know that so many people love this as much as I do. Thanks for the feedback, everyone--I'll try to make sure he keeps writing these (the comments are excellent motivators). :)

-"Leigh"

This is the kind of story I love to read (and write). You give ample attention to building the tension and the backstory. The action is really hot and explores the emotional complexity at the same time. Really terrific writing -- more like this please!

This girl is having emotional issues, and the only thing these two can think about are how to fuck her. They push and goad her, using her insecurities and failed relationships to meet their own desires, not out of any care for her. All they care about is what they want

Just as bad as any manipulative guy.