All Comments on 'Memoirs of a Mature Gentleman'

Why the need for a full page just to say he is gay? 1*

Its a shame and after all you had to offer her

Well unlike some others I think this story to be true and undeserving of the comments so far. I think this story was long enough to express the state of his relationship and I enjoyed the authors take on his limitations, sexually, with his wife.

We are not all bull studs and he seemed to care for his wife and turned a blind eye to her affairs with other men. His own gay experimentation was a result of his failure to please his wife.

because I don't want to read shit like this. This is not a LW story.

No problem with that just post your story there.

And you’re an idiot.

Not a good combination.

ooze back into the gay cesspool with the rest of the brits

I didn't get past the first sentence. I avoid so-called 'true' stories on this fiction/fantasy website .. even though calling a story 'true' may itself be a fantasy.

so I can't judge the quality of this submission.

used to be roman/pictish, celtic, viking....now look at you.....sad lot.

Badly conceived and poorly written. Here's a clue. You're on a porn site, on the world wide web. NO ONE believes a word coming out of your mouth. Telling us that this is a "true" story does absolutely nothing for the story and just makes us laugh. So you started out with 2 strikes against you. Then I read the story. There was no wife, loving or otherwise, to be seen. It clearly belonged in Fetish or Gay male. Strike 3.

1 star, only because negative stars aren't available - yet.

Even "a" "and" and "the"! If she had taught him to take men in his opening, rather than discover the pleasure -- if that -- himself, the story would be better unified. The dildo does suggest a move in that direction, though.

as it is in the Loving Wives category, but shifts toward fetish and gay male.

But you have a good writing style, so hopefully your future stories will be more coherent and cohesive.

You might wonder at my use of words like 'coherent' and 'cohesive' but I'm a fellow Brummie and, mate, you know we can talk the hind leg of a donkey off!

And to prove my Brummie (Ladywood, actually!) credentials I'll sign off with: "Mind the 'os road" "Ta-ra a bit" and watch out for the bobowlers!

otherwise you are going to get roasted here.

Another gay, cucky, Brit author. Scotland, please get your independence before you go this low.

You are pathetic. Why would a gay man/woman/whatever, want your tiny dock anymore than woman would?

An interesting start. A bit rushed near the end, but I just saw this was your first story so I'm sure you'll find your 'pace'. I'd love to hear part 2, 3 and so on.

you sound a lot like me in body shape and sexual preference. I too had a live-in Dom girlfriends that treated me like her pet. Our sex was exactly as you described. I hope you continue to write and share more of your experiences.