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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
thank you

really good stuff -- enjoyed a lot

sussexswitchsussexswitchover 11 years ago
Gender neutral

As a man, this was nearly brilliant as it made no mention of the gender of either the writer or the "victim"...and then it did, right at the end. Slightly disappointed - would have been better if it had been left ambiguous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wow

I'll be your good girl any day.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More please

Mhmm, I came so hard reading both of your submissions, please don't stop now. Have you considered making an audio submission? Would be so nice hearing you call me your good girl ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Amazing.

That was absolutely amazing. At first, I thought that it wasn't working. And then I hit the countdown. I would love to be your good girl ANYDAY. Please continue to write more inductions like these. Absolutely perfect.

SubmissiveDragonSubmissiveDragonabout 10 years ago
Very nice!

At first I thought it wouldn't work, then bam! Very nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good Boy

Yessssssssssssssssss.

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