by NLPredator
As a man, this was nearly brilliant as it made no mention of the gender of either the writer or the "victim"...and then it did, right at the end. Slightly disappointed - would have been better if it had been left ambiguous.
Mhmm, I came so hard reading both of your submissions, please don't stop now. Have you considered making an audio submission? Would be so nice hearing you call me your good girl ;)
That was absolutely amazing. At first, I thought that it wasn't working. And then I hit the countdown. I would love to be your good girl ANYDAY. Please continue to write more inductions like these. Absolutely perfect.
At first I thought it wouldn't work, then bam! Very nicely done!