All Comments on 'Mexicans in My Bed Ch. 02'

Great story

Please. Dont let the incest go on. Its disgusting. Its ok to pretend with alberto.

Thank you for reading it and making comments. I found the incest a tad sickening also but somehow it flowed out. I wish I could say they will never have sex together again. But old disgusting Alberto may have other plans.

I like your writing. If you could just stay with one perspective.

It's nice to read about how mother and daughter heat up more and more.

Let the daughter get taken by Alberto and then taken into a shady trucker place where she gets a hole lot more of dirty stinky smegma-ridden dicks and loves the smell and taste. And let both of them get taken over by their breeding-urges letting them lose all shame and going into slutty promiscious babymaking mode.

it got me so wet and horny reading this. even for the forth time. I hope you will send us more soon. gave a five.

I wish I had this kind of relationship with my mom when I was a teen.

very hot, loved it.

I blew a big load when cindy started telling alberto that maybe her and beth should suck him together, etc.. and then I came again when she started pretending beth was seeing them in bed together... also loved the way the incest just happened, not planned at all, just an act of love because of bruised feelings. please continue cindy..

oh no, another teen pregnant.. they are everywhere..

loved this story.. did not see the make up sex between mom and dau coming

really good.

I almost stopped reading it once the incest started but the way cindy seemed to feel about beth forgiving her, the natural unfolding of the nibbles, words, and love. I found myself accepting it . thank you for sharing.

I agree with earlier commenter, the incest happened in a very natural way and I never felt it was wrong.

very hot story! Hoping you continue it soon.

More,, more... we need to know..

Most trucker stories are very hot. I hope more sex time inside big rigs is coming from this Writer. 4 so far.

5 here, that mom daughter sex was hot and the fantasies before it happened were great too.

still hoping the next Ch. is coming

that makes 300 of us.. thumps my finger on the table,,, waiting.

and now even higher still, with mom already carrying load number 1

Leave a note for him? I'm betting he is hiding in the closet having just watched you two in action.

Beth needs to eat mom's pussy, then she can have alberto and pretty much anything else she wants.

the last three comments are weird. and so is mine.

I hope it continues. More truck drivers should get involved. Alberto tells them to stop by and visit Cindy while Beth is on the road with him.

I have read this three times. the fantasy 3 way sex between mom and man is great. it helped make the incest sex hotter too somehow.

very hot read. Mom knows how to love her little girl.

The intimacy is rather cheesy, plain, and boring. I'm not sure how anyone really enjoyed this.

I don't get the appeal of these stories. The grammar is terrible, the characters are confusing, the sex scenes are vague. I guess I just don't get it. It must be me, because the praise for this crap seems to be universal. Oh well... Time to move on, I guess.

Havent read a bad story by you, my only critcism is several havent been finished, which is really irritating. Its like watching half a film. To be fair though, its not just you that does it.

a brilliant conclusion to part 1. great details, great choice of language. can hear every character's voice as distinct. in answer to the final question, no, conclude this here. it becomes a bit abstract/mannerist but fun with all of the specific choices in the dialogue. it is very detailed, but the emotions and language are not realistic, though they are fun and arousing. would love to see a more realistic story about similar subjects rather than a continuation of this excellent but more animated work. would love to see that level of detail to more realistic behaviors, including the pleasure of sharing mother and grown adult daughter. --ruuseltrust

It's been a while since you wrote. I am hoping you start again. I liked Mexicans in my bed. Somebody(s) need to get pregnant. Then you need to incorporate more people with some MM bisexual.