by superssunnyselena
Love it... love and hate the ending... love it cuz it makes me want more... and I love Mia and Gio... hate it cuz I didn't want it to end lol... but love love love the story... NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...just for the action alone. I love Sarah and the obvious chemistry between Gio and Mia. Can't wait for more. :)
"I felt like every time I texted Jacob for more than 30 minutes, I lost a lot of brain cells. How hard was it to spell out your words and use punctuation?"
You could learn from what you wrote! Quite a few times you used numbers instead of the words, and punctuation and grammar is lacking a lot of the time.
Please write more I have been looking for updates. Really amazing story.π
I really, really, really like Mia. She's a wonderful character and so funny. Very rarely do I find comedy in stories on Lit but she's hilarious and I found myself laughing on several occasions . I really like her- just saying again. Another rarity- for me to like the lead.