All Comments on 'Mia Mine Ch. 05'

by cliptoe

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Dreamweaver594Dreamweaver594about 10 years ago
Keep it up!

Beautiful passion, love, and joy.

kriss4912kriss4912about 10 years ago
Has it all

Cooking tips, Back ground story, Love, Passion and a well told tale this has all that and more. A super chapter in the now much loved characters Mia and David lives a well told love story, that it has the "label" transgender means nothing as this is an out and out love story of two nice people

Well done and thank you

krissie

Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgabout 10 years ago
Romantic, Caring and Thoughtful...

...Nothing more to say, beautifully written TG love story, and one of the best, thanks for sharing and hope to see many more chapters and stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Love will keep them together.

I loved this chapter and hope that there will be many more to come. The story just gets better and better. The only thing missing was the shower scene with both Mia and David in it together. You made a point that David seems to hiding something from his past since he was hiding some details from his story. And Mia has not gone into much about her past. I do hope that you will bring out the details of their past to round out the story. The love that they share is great and hope that you can continue the story with such a high level of writing. Can not wait for the next chapter.

RJ

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Excellent

It's more of a love story than a sex story. I love the way it has been written

pacnw2014pacnw2014about 10 years ago
Mia Amour

Love this... I want more Mia... Oh the fantasy...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

yes more chapters where mia takes over the job at that office and moves in with david and they get married

agamottoagamottoabout 10 years ago
Quite enjoyable,

I love that this is more of a romance than a sex marathon, it has plot, story, background, and LOVE. Everything a real romance needs. Please keep writing, I would like to see more chapters, to find out if he gets to meet her parents, maybe even get married!

sober71sober71about 8 years ago
I'm completely smitten

You have captured love so well, just adoring this journey.

Thank you.

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