All Comments on 'Mia's Late Awakening Ch. 02'

by AudreysO

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SharpguySharpguyabout 9 years ago
Keep Writing!

I love the direction and pace of this tale. Looking forward to more of Mia and Daddy.

kanggaaakanggaaaabout 9 years ago
great part 2

hope you keep mia's adventures up Audrey. And you have her brother now to perhaps "move in".

great story so far.........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

excellent....patient..slow....very good writing as well...looking forward to more of Mia and her daddy.....

geminimissiongeminimissionabout 9 years ago
Great work

Really love the chain part 2 was even better than the 1st! Excellent writing and anticipation build and the situation was perfect. Can't wait for part 3.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
continue!!!

I hope you continue -So far, love it! Just like I imagine a cute, lovely teen dreams

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Please continue!

This is very well written and extremely sexy. I can't wait to see where the story goes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
cant wait for part three

Just keeps getting better!

daddy1950daddy1950about 9 years ago
Mmm! Very sexy.

You're nicely developing the story, bringing out the strong love between them. Plus now she's 'awake' and both know what's happening, adds an important element. Another five stars.

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