by AudreysO
You're nicely developing the story, bringing out the strong love between them. Plus now she's 'awake' and both know what's happening, adds an important element. Another five stars.
This is very well written and extremely sexy. I can't wait to see where the story goes.
I hope you continue -So far, love it! Just like I imagine a cute, lovely teen dreams
Really love the chain part 2 was even better than the 1st! Excellent writing and anticipation build and the situation was perfect. Can't wait for part 3.
excellent....patient..slow....very good writing as well...looking forward to more of Mia and her daddy.....
hope you keep mia's adventures up Audrey. And you have her brother now to perhaps "move in".
great story so far.........
I love the direction and pace of this tale. Looking forward to more of Mia and Daddy.