All Comments on 'Michelle's Shows Her Pair'

Isn't bigger than DDD

Not going to win any literary awards, but surprisingly erotic nevertheless. Maybe I'm just a sucker for 'girls taking what they want' stories, but I reckon this was a good first effort. Four stars.

More please, also E isn't actually bigger (not that I give a shit)

E is the same as DD, DDD is F, so bigger than that would be G.

I'm picky on words being spelled correctly. Some commentors are confused about cup sizes.

It's a cute, believable story.

Thanks for all the feedback folks, the story was written in one sitting on a whim.

The cup size issue wasn't realized until after I submitted the story. Also, if that matter has been commented upon several times in the spots above your comment-- safe to say it need not be raised again, the error has been duly noted.

As for the grammatical errors and mis-spellings, there were too many to go unnoticed. This was my first submission, and I wasn't sure if the editors took care of those things before approval. In any case, if i write any more, a greater effort will be made to avoid grammatical and spelling mistakes.

Hope the story was enjoyable for what it was.