All Comments on 'Microchips Ch. 05'

please keep them coming!! 5 stars

This story keeps getting better. Thanks.

Tanya sizzles while still being vulnerable and I love you painting her as a submissive. I appreciate you show Natalie as being accepting of the love triangle although I would ask you never make it a threesome.

My only questions would concern the guys that originally approached Tanya, as I do not remember her saying anything about it before, except the part about being turfed out of the company. The "element of danger" now seems a bit improbable, so I suggest building a little more backstory into this or do something to make that part more plausible while giving the story an extra boost of action too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

My only negative comment would be stop recapping at the start of every installment. It gets to repetative. The characters are well written and the story line leaves you a lot of places to go. I am really enjoying it. Keep going.

Not so much as a three some or a quad. but a poly-amorous arrangement. public side. He can be seen with Tanya, and Nat can be seen with Alex. takes much of the pressure off the relationship. {Private friends with benefits all the way around as it should be. On the spy side. fake chips will help track to the source unless the receivers want a demo of them. that will blow the gig. remember to rig the controller so It explodes. the first time it is turned on * accidentally of course