All Comments on 'Midnight Visitor'

Such a good start to the story. I feel their story could continue but it was a great place to stop. If you continue, I will certainly read it! I really liked the insight of our main character’s head. I connected with her but if you take criticism, I feel more emotion could have been added. Such an event would be emotionally charging. It wasn’t bad by any circumstance! I enjoyed it thoroughly and look forward to more from you! I hope this isn’t your only work ^^

Thanks for sharing!

For a pre-pubescent teenager you have a vivid if somewhat confused imagination.I won't do anything you don't want so why the restraints? Good grief Charlie Brown.