All Comments on 'Mika Makes a Mistake'

Great story! Loved it. Part 2???

She could not be a happier camper, more BDSM than NC. Unless you plan to take it there.

She bitch slaps him and leaves. Nothing else makes any sense. 1 star.

Loved this story! Best I've read in a long while. Keep up the great work!

I've enjoyed your other stories quite a bit, but this one especially hit it out of the park. Keep it coming

I'm either having an asthma attack or this was a really, reeeely hot story

Another chapter please!

I'm a big fan of your stories, but I would espe'ially like to see this turned into a series! Thank you for putting the time and effort you do into your stories, I look forward to many more.!

A friend of mine recommended the story, so I gave it a try despite not really being a regular NC fan. The first couple paragraphs had me worrying that the protagonist was going to be too skeevy to identify with, as the gas station attendant protagonist often is. He obviously had a bit o' dirtbag in him, but just enough to make the story work. This is A+ work. 5 stars: Nothing else makes any sense.

I'd love to see what happens next!

This deserves a second chapter. Great story. Very hot. Nice to see an Asian woman get into the mix. The NC was handled well and was not too rapey. I'd love to see what happened that night or when Mika (named for Mika Tan?) came for another visit.

Awesome! Best way to land a hot new gf ;)

...but what happens when he takes her home? Does he call his brother to come over and share the hottie? Does his bro bring his bi-GF? Oh, yes, there's a lot more too this story.

You are a wretch if you are wretched. Before you vomit you make retching sounds and you retch.

I did not think I would enjoy this story as much as I did but the fact that he was not a total ass and how into it she was really into it made this rather sweet despite the setting.

There definitely is the possibility to continue the story if you ever want to. But as-is it is already quite good. 5 Stars from me

This looks like the start of a beeeyoutiful friendship!

great story, waiting to hear about the next 24 hours

Although there were a couple of places I felt could've/should've been expanded a bit (No more than 1-2 sentences so...), I still rated this 5 stars because the theme, the hot action, the fact that he wasn't a BAD asshole and the fact that she was really into it, even pushing him to do more, rougher, more than made up for the mild skimpiness in a couple of areas.

Please don't give up on this storyline and give us a few more chapters. You really have something here. :-)

X-Man

5 stars

Is there a part two to this? Interesting to see more out of this deelopment

I would love to read more of this storyline!

yup, needs a part 2.