All Comments on 'Mike & Amy'

learn spelling, grammar and punctuation

Major problems with spelling, grammar, and consistency. (somehow 12" became 14", etc.)

its a fuck story, not a writing contest

good job, now try a shy 1

The basic rules of grammar and syntax aren't there to hinder or control, but are there to insure that the ideas and thoughts are clearly presented. If a writer can't be bothered to learn the basics of grammar and syntax, then I can't be bothered to give them anything more than a one (1).

"Story" is the noun, and "fuck" is the adjective, describing what type of story is being presented. The story comes first, including spelling, grammar, and punctuation.

Gave me a boner...musta worked!

English teachers aside, if you liked writing and thinking about this story, then keep on.

Grab a ruler, and see just how wide 6 and 1/2 inches really is...Nobody's cock is that big...gimme a break !!!

this was a really pathetic and boring story. the author doesn't have a clue what she is trying to convey. read it and you will only end up getting bored.

good story don't listen to no one this story is hot who cares if you write about a size not one guy would have just do a good job

Storyline was good... narration and facts were really bad. the guy's penis is originally longer than 1 feet and then as the story progresses, so does the size. No seriously, do you have an idea how long is 12 inches.

Also, I would recommend English 101 at a local college... because sometimes I would be like wtf has he written.

This exact same thing happened to me last year!! My cousin is my sex slave slut too now. She cant get enough of my sometimes 12" and othertimes 14" cock too!! I feel like maybe you spied on us or something... Wow, exactly how we did it. Loved the story.

I went to a family funeral last year and saw my cousin I had not seen in 10 years. She was divorced. When we were little kids we use to play doctor and you show me yours I'll show you mine. I told her I was staying at a hotel and after the wake, and a few drinks she asked me if I remembered playing doctor. I said yes, and she said want to pay it again. We went back to the hotel and we fucked four times before she left. What great pussy.

Looks like it was written by a virgin to me.

Also, 14 inch long cock? 6.5 inch wide cock? Really? Is this guy an elephant? Actually, elephant cocks arent even that wide.

Sounds a bit like virgin fantasies to be honest with you, and I think whoever wrote this isn't even old enough to consent to having sex let alone write about it.

"Amy couldn't believe what an animal Mike really was about sex....with out hesitation rammed his big dick into her ass all the way until his pelvis hit her ass cheeks"

Get experience, babe. Then try again, or at least get someone to beta your stories.

just a horrible horrible story. feels like it was written by some child who is dreaming of these sick fantasies. 14" 6 1/2"? LOL GET REAL. story line sucked. grammar sucked. narration sucked. no point at all to the story. i would give you negatives in score but all I'll settle for is a 1.

im a virgin and i write better porn than this. i dont post it, but imma give you an example. the biggest cocks get in my story are 7 inches (which is normal) and the boobs are (maximum) a C cup.

added two inches to his already overlarge penis and she has huge boobs.

this story sucked ass didn't even get off