All Comments on 'MILF Submissive the Beginning'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
this was painful to read

please, get an editor... you have decent material, but it needs help.

liz33ndliz33ndover 8 years ago
great content

Good writing. The erotica is missing, it needs more seduction and details as to what Sir is requiring of you. Good start tho.

kboneonekboneoneabout 1 year ago

taught is to teach

the word you are looking for is TAUT

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