All Comments on 'Mili Gets Back at the Wrong Husband'

I probably won't bother to read the sequel.

cucky wimp story. It is off to a limp start as it is.

Take a writing class, get an editor and learn to develop the characters. Please do this BEFORE you attempt to submit anything else.

Terrible story also.

She can become the Corporate whore!

Did she even challenge - No!

Did she seek any confirmation - No!

Sis she fight rhe acosters - No!

Get Adam a serious promotion for his silence and their agreement to encourage her to give him the divorce and become their PR department (Whore)!!!

So very hot and erotic. She's so exotic and taking three up the bung hole was more special with cum on her pretty face. Damn I'd want tha ass if she was my wife when we got home. More please.

Both the writing and the story.

Fucking terrible!

It gives me a chance to vote for all your stories.

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i dont care what the others say...i loved it.... you know who I am...:)

waiting for your next submission

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mili

Nobody is as gullible as you made the Indian wife seem to be,even drunk. And her husband had to be aware that the combination of all the alcohol with all the horndogs at this party meant that he shouldn't let her wander off alone. This story is just a pile of camel droppings!

Can't wait to read more of this story.

That film is going to get around to all the people that work there.poor husband is just going to be humiliated and left with one choice which is to devorce tha stupid slut and sue all those idiots for alianation of affection. Company is going to pay him a hefty sum of money.

Challenge yourself to write a way out for her to save her marriage and hubby's self respect.

Another author that starts something and can't be bothered to finish it. He's posted other stories but hasn't finished this one. Lazy jackass.

I mean really. How dumb is she?