All Comments on 'Military Wife Plays While Away Pt. 02'

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AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 6 years ago
Nothing wrong with hot black cock

Marriage does not have to end, maybe just a change of direction. Give it a try xoxoxoxo Annette

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
gee

single mother in waiting and probably many sexual transmitted diseases 1

NWRaptorNWRaptorover 6 years ago

Wow. Five years between chapters is a long time, although the first part could have stood alone. Thanks for the addition.

SexyBeastSexyBeastover 6 years ago
Huh?

The first part switched from 3rd person POV to 2nd (an odd choice) out of nowhere, and this story is written in 1st person? What is going on?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Both Chapters Created the Appearance that this was Active Duty for the Six characters, so

If they were Guardsmen on Temporary Active Duty or Active Duty for Training, why weren't their military ranks mentioned and so either raise or eliminate the possibilty of wrongful fraternization, a criminal offense under the UCMJ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

minis all the stars in the world your story is all bull shit you are trying to change the thinking of white people fuck you and all the other scum bags like you eat shit and die you are the world biggest low life piece of shit in the world..

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