All Comments on 'Milk Ch. 03'

Like it very much, please continue your story.

Even with her nursing before it's going to probably take more then one session to get her started and then she'll need to pump her tits at least once a day or they will stop milk production . The more often she pumps her breasts the more milk she'll produce .You could easily pump her boobs four times a day .The longer the milk stays in her tits the less she will make . The milk itself has hormones in it that reduce milk production . Nature designed them to fill up and stop making milk " don't want to waste any you know " . Nice story , erotic .Keep it up .

Lovin your work more please

You should indicate someplace in the story whether your cock is uncut or not. It makes it more interesting when she has to peel your foreskin back over the head of your cock before she sucks it.

Also a little peeing in the story would enhance it a bit too.

The fucking machine is a quite brilliant idea, so erotic. You put it on though, and go to the front to be sucked off. But you dont stay in charge of it, so the reader doesnt know if it is going to continue as fast after she has just cum? the only way that could be erotic is if she said "Oh stop the machine, I've just cum" and he replies "I'm leaving it on, you will cum again now, cum on baby, cum for me" or something like that. That actually happened to me, and it was so sexy just continuing to be fucked instead of stopping. Great story, love your writing.

Best one yet but it is not fair to the children if she has several young babies if she is too old it sucks when your parents are the age of everyone else's grand parents trust me I know.

Great story, but I was less keen on the anal theme than previous stories. The fucking machine was genius, a huge one making its way slowly up her would have been very erotic. There could have been a bit of clit stimulation to help her orgasm while having anal sex. I found it hard to believe she could cum so many times with nothing else going on. Spending more time getting her udders ready for the milking machine would have been erotic I think, perhaps a small rub with sandpaper to get her nipples hard.

The strangeness of what he was doing to her made the story fall flat.