All Comments on 'Milk Nurse Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love it!

Im loving this story, please continue :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Great, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
This could have been a hot story

but the writing was very awkward. You kept switching between the first and third person, which was very distracting to the reader.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good

I like that he secretly likes this. Me encanta.

HaythamKenwayHaythamKenwayabout 3 years ago

Was really confusing.

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