All Comments on 'Miranda: Further Education Pt. 01'

I enjoyed your story very much. My only observation would be that your made up pronouns make it hard to read. I understand what you were going for and why she and her don't exactly apply to your characters but it makes it more difficult to read. They disrupt the flow of the story. Other than that it was excellent

When I first read this story there were at least two other comments about how distracting your invented pronouns were. I added one. They're now gone. Are you actually deleting constructive criticism?? This story would be excellent if we weren't constantly having to interpret your pronouns. And, as I said before, both of these individuals are pretty clearly not androgynous, which is the only time such pronouns would make sense. They are clearly identifying as female. So use female pronouns!!!

I have heard you all and I have been looking for a way to delete this story so I could replace with an updated version. While yes I did delete the seven different comments, the ones from before we're not all constructive but some were very insulting so I was on auto piolet. I'm sorry it seems that way. I get it. You don't like the pronouns, I am resubmitting it without them so everyone can enjoy it.

Pilot* not piolot...

This was so much easier to read the 2nd time out. I have been a huge fan of your Miranda series to date. I hope there is more to come soon.

Love the Miranda stories! Can't wait for more! Chris