by Libertine
I love all your stories. Even though English is your second or third or whatever language, your grammar is pretty much right on, and the spelling is usually good, too. However, your themes and characters are the best. Keep it up!
please write another edition of this story.. love to see father get active.....
Having just finished this entire story, I have come to the conclusion that it wouldn't be half as long if it wasn't for all of the repetitive narrative (at least 2/3's cut where the doings were repeated to another person, mainly the Mother).
Other than that, I quite enjoyed