All Comments on 'Miss Fix-it'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 days ago

Total bollocks

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 5 years ago
Great story!

I enjoyed her confusion and arousal. The way she was trying to make sense of her reactions while seamlessly following those very reactions. Mmmm.

I will confess that you threw me for a bit with RepairWoman having both coveralls and tight denim pants... but then I decided that I didn't really need to understand more than that she was being stripped, and found herself more thrilled than alarmed. Once over that little bump, mmmm.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Mixed feelings

Well written and hot -but it leaves me feeling uneasy.

visioneervisioneerabout 10 years ago

A well-crafted and well-written story. Great job building up the characters and setting the scene - very believable. If you follow-up with a sequel, it would be interesting to have the business exec push her dominace further. Nice work.

gnome_mangnome_manabout 10 years ago
Hot and Bothered

That's what I am. You delivered an excellent story, with good craftsmanship and very interesting people. I would like to read its sequel.

PerilEyesPerilEyesabout 10 years ago
More of businesswoman

More than wanting a continuation, I'd like more of businesswoman's seductions!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
hope

I hope you continue this adventure......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Really good

I just hope theirs a part -two soon : )

LisaJayeLisaJayeabout 10 years ago
very nice

Very nice , especially enjoyed how the repair person was straight . a nice little twist . But what does Miss Fix it look like ? Nicely done

Vlad2010Vlad2010about 10 years ago
Multi-part

You have an excellent story and a clear opportunity for a great multi-part story! Thanks.

curiousonejcuriousonejabout 10 years ago
Very good

Hope there a part two of this story

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I read and write romantic stories, complete with character and relationship development. A high percentage of my work is lesbian fiction. (That said, I have tried or will try writing almost anything!) It's rare, but I also do a bit of editing and proofreading. I love gettin...