All Comments on 'Miss Pepperidge Ch. 01'

Verbose!!! A boring attempt ! This is not the proper forum

for a manuscript presentation!! Send to a book publisher!

I sure you have read other on site stories, one still active at its 81st chapter. SOL which makes it much easier to see story size, has several active and going strong in the multi hundred chapter or 3-4 MB in length.

Having gotten past the Idiot, I like your story, it pushed a couple of my buttons and I look forward to seeing more (pun intended).

It is a pity the voyeurs wern't invited in to finish off the cumbath and give Miss Pepperidge's holes a thorough fucking.