All Comments on 'Mistaken Identity'

by Gregory_Henderson

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Not bad

-- but you gave it away in the index description.

gordo12gordo12about 7 years ago
Really

she could talk all that time. Saying no no no. Saying his name multiple times but couldn't tell him who she was until after.......A plot hole the size of lake michigan.

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dreamer3366dreamer3366about 7 years ago
????

So why was Caetlyn in his house/bed?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Terribly written.

I know third grade children who can write better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Should Have

had him a bit drunk to explain why he did not recognize his sister's voice or smell.

thedusty1thedusty1about 7 years ago
Hot

The descriptions were great. Loved how you described their encounter. My ex and I did something like this, it was great but luckily she was an only child. Hope there's more to fill in the blanks and answer questions.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 6 years ago
Nice

For his wife to provide some sport for her hubbie. Perhaps she should have warned her sis it was going to happen.

But alls well that cums well.

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