All Comments on 'Mistakes of Ryli Kate Ch. 01'

Just as its getting super good it ends!! *sigh* Excellent first chapter, I love it! I hope you post more soon!

Best wishes,

A.K.Q.

Hello Mouthy_submissive, and thank you for choosing to write your erotic stories for Lit. I really enjoyed this one and I hope it won't be long before we have chapter 2.

4 *s for now, and I'm sure there will be more if you keep up this standard of work.

Okay I have to say, this seems like the making of a good story, however I also have to say I am not feeling the what seems like abuse for abuse sake vibe I am getting from reading this. That being said I want to see what happens next.

I'd definitely wouldn't want to piss that Master off! I'm on the fence about how abusive and toxic this relationship is, but strangely, I'm turned on. I would like to read the next chapter.

I loved your story; I can't wait to read more

isn't quite as harsh as yours and no matter how many times i have begged him to be harsher he hasn't quite managed it.

hopefully one day he will realize this is what i need and want and what makes me hot.

Thanks for the feedback guys! I hope to continue to gain your approval!

I like the story, can't wait for the contiuation how Master deals with Ryli. Please continue to write.

please continue the story you have me hooked.........

You are a fantastic writer. I'm simultaneously fascinated by and terrified of this Dom. And I love how the story wasn't just about a sub being bratty; she thought that there was another woman, which in her mind seemed to be enough to defy her Master, even though she knew how harsh he could be. Sigh. Conundrum. Loved it!

An excellent story! I hope you plan on continue writing about the ordeals of this poor girl.