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Click hereErin was a very, very talented cocksucker, especially for someone so young and relatively inexperienced. So talented in fact, that I did not last long at all. I warned her that I was coming and then pulled her down tight to my balls again before unleashing ropes of cum straight down her throat. I held her there as I drained into her. I released her to crash down onto her knees and I fell back on the bed. We were both panting heavily.
Finally I had my breathing under control enough to sit up again. Erin was lovely, with a thin line of cum and drool extending from the corner of her mouth down to her breast. Christopher was staring at her still heaving tits. I also noticed that the young man had a sizeable tent in the front of his pants.
"Erin," I spoke to gain her attention, and motioned to her boyfriend's waist, "it looks like he enjoyed the show. I think that you should take care of him now."
"Oh Mister Dane, can I? Thank you, sir."
I stood up and stepped around the couple as Erin started on Chris's pants – with no protest from him. While she was blowing him, I stepped into the shower quickly. When I got out she was still at it, so I dressed and gathered my things into my travel bag. Finally I sat down...just in time to hear the young man scream that he was coming, and watch my young woman hold him tight to her face with both hands clutching his naked ass. When he was done she held him in place so that she could carefully lick him clean, and then she stood to hug him tightly. Done, she came to me and pulled me out of the chair for a hug and a whispered, "thank you."
"You two should go back to Chris's now." Looking directly into Erin's eyes I continued, "I am fine and will head home tomorrow."
They looked at each other, the young woman with a hopeful expression on her face and the young man still grinning like an idiot. He nodded to her and she laughed before pulling her shirt back on. I, for the first time, shook Christopher's hand, and then kissed my girl, whispering in her ear, "I do love you Erin...and no, I do not give you permission to 'bed' this young man. I will see you in March. Have a merry Christmas...and thank you Erin."
For my readers...the next chapter will take a number of months to be complete. Be patient.
Thank you
- COMMENTS
guan818over 4 years agoIt has been more than 4 years since the last chapter posted, when will be the next chapter coming? Aren't we patient enough?
Wizard1983almost 7 years agoFYI there is a re-write of this story on Amazon for Kindle. There are quite a few changes from this version but basically the same story and it does have a conclusion to the saga. I bought it and read it.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI also got the Kindle version of the continuing story of Mister Gabe (aka Black bastard)
Throughout the story it was how he was going to get back at the Black Bastard, well
it was a very disappointing on how little anything is mentioned about getting back at him. Oh a few things are mentioned credit card issues and his lease on his airplanes
cancelled that was it nothing else. We eventually find out when Jen called one of the kids that Gabe didn't make parole again. That's nice what happen about telling us what he was finally busted for and for how long. A rushed and lousy ending sorry I paid for it.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI have read the "Amazon- version", couple of changes again. Still a very good story, but in my opnion with a very sad not to say depressing ending.
Hope the author, if he ever decide to post the "missing" chapters, thinks about changing the last 10-20% of his tale
TarcoTronover 8 years agoThe complete story is now available on Amazon Kindle. Just for you information. Don't know if it will released here in a couple of month, too?
