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by dazedandconfusedintx

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Honestly. It kind of sucked.

It was painfully short and bland. The dialogue was weak and wooden. The action is just as bad if not worse.

It feels empty and comes of as a immature attempt at writing something sexual.

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