All Comments on 'Mistress: Love, Pain & Humiliation Ch. 01'

If you're not going to write them any better than this, more chapters really aren't necessary.

As a first offering, I found this well-written, apart from a few technical errors, and an enjoyable read. It is often said that you can't please everyone, so it's best not to try.

I look forward to Chapter 2 - and further chapters, too. Thank you for posting. Four stars.

then it fell apart. I agree, no need for Ch. 02.

NO CHAPTER 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I had to go outside and FART, so I could face my computer once more. I am glad that you are a "couple"(from your profile). Usually I check a sex part in the profile before making any comments, but a couple???? Maybe a couple of NUTS?? Please do not write any more. your style is undeveloped and there is no substance to your story. You start with a loving couple and then jet-shoot in to sick and sadistic shit. Thank god you did not make any racist statements. If you are trying to be provocative, that did not work.......it came through just offensive and not very well written. BUT FEMDOM STORIES CAN BE SOOOOOO SEXY. So please, do not write for a while, read some good stories on this cite, make notes and find an editor. I am toooooo busy, so do not ask

i think next you should make him go outside naked and wash your car or get the mail