All Comments on 'Mobility Ch. 02'

This has great potential, Maybe one of the the greats, I’m really looking forward to the next chapter...thanks again.

to be a great series! You could have put all 3 chapters in one rather than breaking it down like you did- but it still works. Remember; on Literotica when you break chapters it throws off the train of thought for the readers. A good cutoff is about 12 to 15 pages; less than that is OK, beyond that it gets tedious.

One nit pick, it's areola, not aureola.