- BDSM
- Model Slave Ch. 05
- Page 4
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Right now, her face radiated love and happiness, something he had seen on her, but not as soft or real as it was now. As his hands roamed her delicious body he felt a tug in his heart. What was it about this gorgeous waif that made his heart sing and feel things he thought he would never feel? He didn't know how she got to him, but he liked the feeling.
Patrick sat on the bed and watched Penny soften in her sleep, but occasionally a tremor would ripple through her body. He knew he was falling in love with her, but he had work to do and he had to keep her safe until she was truly free. He gently leaned over and kissed her belly and then stood to leave. His eyes took in one last look before he covered her with the duvet, turned out the lights and left to do battle with the slavers.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous11 months agoAnyone who thinks that the romantic and the descriptive erotic are incompatible has never read Oupa99's stories, where the opposite is proven, and this chapter is just one proof of that. A marvelous continuation of the story, this chapter is truly engaging from start to finish. This series had great drama, great characters, magnificent love scenes, and the romantic element adds true depth. Five stars.
Anonymousover 3 years agoWhile BDSM may be the correct categorization in previous chapters of this superb story, in Chapter Five the romantic element really comes to the fore. As the plot develops, so does the romantic element, invoking in the reader great feelings of tenderness and compassion for the beleaguered heroine. Magnificent storytelling. Five stars
Tcusterover 9 years agoI've greatly enjoyed your story over the last couple days. I love your passionate writing and am so happy you decided to continue with this story. Love the direction you went and can't wait for more.
