All Comments on 'Mom: A Smoky Love Story'

Nice story but you could have left out the cigarettes and probably made it more interesting

It was a great story but the first comment that followed was incredibly moronic about leaving out the cigarettes. Geeze. The story starts with an author's note saying its a smoke fetish story. Hard to write a smoke fetish story without cigarettes.

This story was an excellent read, in my opinion.

And, it's funny: some dolt left a comment about how he thought the "smoking" part of it should have been left out. Thirty years ago, the smoking would have been acceptable, but the incest would have been offensive. My, how times have changed!

I am an absolute staunch anti-smoker, but this story made me want to go out & buy a pack. The story plotline was wonderful, slow build up, great seduction - hell, just plain sexy! Great stuff, well done.

The smoking with mom was the whole point of this story and you did it well. I thought your story line and sentence structure was fine but.... There is a but here. For a story of mother and son incest, this was a bomb. I get what you were doing but there is nothing like a good jack off story to keep my interest and this one left me limp. Fetish stories have such a small public and I unfortunately don't feast on that slice of pie. Give me more sex with all that smoke and my cock would have been up in smoke with yours.

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Everything has a fine line, but have the brother be told by the mom that he has to look at his older brother as his dad? That's pretty fucked up, talk about having issues!

i loved this just like me and my mother she is a heavy sexy smoker with a set of huge juggs i take my mother out she wears miniskirts nylons heels we get drunk and sleep together mother chain smoking in bed

my mother now 72 y o smokes 4 packs a day we live together moms got a huge set of 58" FFF juggs she cums to bed in corsetts garters nylons 6" spike high heels she chain smokes as i seduce her love mom smoking while i jugg fuck her and while i assfuck my drunken motrher

mother haking weezing chain smoking in bed me on top

I loved reading your story....It was about my Mom....she was stacked, short and smoked all the time...I enjoyed looking at her...and watching her smoke...she had wide hips...baby making hips...great tits and a nice soft peter belley....I loved them all...hope you write more...it was very stinulating and helped me find some needed relief...if you know what I mean....write more mom smoking stories we need them

This is the best story I've read, I'd love for there to be more!

MOTHER Son in love reminds me of my past

Loved it. Thanks!

I never could understand how smoking is a sexual turn on. If the industry ever figured it out I'll bet they would come up with some really interesting advertising.

The tobacco industry must just love that smoking is a sexual turn on for a segment of the really weird fetish population. Imagine the Marlborough Man with Daisy Duke . . . .