All Comments on 'Mom, Is That You? Pt. 03'

What was Mia's secret that she was so nervous about getting found out? Seems it wasn't the porn movie that she did so what was it???

Dude- you need to clean up your grammar and spelling! Its hard to get totally into the story when you're trying to figure out what you're saying.

People keep telling you to either proof read your stories or get an editor. You ignore the friendly advice.

It absolutely amazes me how illiterate people are. How anyone could be so shameless, have so little pride, and zero humility is beyond me. To think all they need do is submit it to a volunteer editor, and save us the time wasted, and themselves the embarrassment, and yet they refuse. It holds true even with some of the better authors here.

Sorry but I'm giving you 1 star, to drastically reduce your score.

His mom fucked a man and her sick son wanted her. He said that his mom was a whore. In part one, His mom fucked a black man that stretched out her pussy so loose that her son loved a loose pussy. The baby his mom had from the black man. Her son loved going to work to keep up the kid.

A lot of good ideas. Keep writing and try to be a bit more realistic. Some of your personal activities and feelings could provide better insight.

Good story, but a most brutal read. Editor, please!

Good start and having his Mom and her close friend both doing him is a real treat !! I hope in the next chapter, he and his Mom focus on Kristen and bang her hard, make out and squirt his cum all over Kristen head to toe. Cannot wait until another chapter arrives. Thanks !

I can't wait to see what mom thought her son found out, it was not the IR porn, so what could it be. I hope you let us in on the secret. If not in the story here in an email. Keep writing.

great story.i hope more parts are coming.

Absolutely sucking fucking fabulous. What would I not give to be getting it on with these two red hot cunts, sucking and fucking each other’s brains out at the same time. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.