All Comments on 'Mom Lights Up Ch. 02'

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Chile PeelerChile Peelerover 19 years ago
I like the subject matter, but the writing. . .

. . .style is too hurried. We need more dialogue, more internal feelings of all the participants. What the guy feeling when he slides it to his aunt for the first time? etc. Some of the couplings only last a paragraph

ConnollyAssociationConnollyAssociationover 19 years ago
Its Time

Its time for mum to become a full on slut for her son. Take off the shackles and let the games begin. Obviously in her state of mind her boy can really take charge and it seems only obvious that this should happen - mum is ripe for some really humiliating sex.

odie121odie121over 19 years ago
hot mom....

...love this story... hope you keep it going, even if you need to make up some good tales... sounds like your hot body was made for sex....

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Pathetic

very pathetic. hope you have a decent day job. Although I suspect that is done pathetically also.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
lucky

ur so lucky man i want my mom so bad she's 38 DD tits natural blond gr8 story....

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