All Comments on 'Mom Named Barbie Ch. 11'

by PegasusRyder

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

One of the best. Plz continue with many more chapter. Cant wait fir the nexf installment. Very sexy, and slutty...

ardoardoover 7 years ago
hi

Liked all the others much better

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More

Please have Barbie and Jay fuck each other in the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fucked up

Hated this chapter. Went and fucked someone else, what the hell. Please end this soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Plz write more. Want mom to fuck the whole town, add some gangbang. Two thumbs up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Mom is such a horny slut and i love it. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very sexy

More slutty mom action

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Dang It

This was going well - thought she could be redeemed till she went out and screwed a stranger. If she had only had a crisis of conscience and not let him screw her, I think the supposed love for Jay could have been her salvation.

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
Very good!

A very good addition to this story! Thank you!

AllintheheadAllintheheadover 7 years ago
Now what?

Ok if he was angry with mom/Barbara for sleeping around and wrecking his life, how is he going to deal if he finds out that "Barbie" just did the same thing. I'm interested to see how you spin the rest of the tale

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
One of the best chapter yet

i love it!!!!! Please make mommy fuck more guys, dont stop writing. Can't wait to read whats next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
So sexy, i want more

Once a slut, always a slut. Hope she get gangbang next.

10speed10speedover 7 years ago
Not as

allinthehead if you read the beginning of the story she went out 'NOT AS BARBIE' BUT I LIKED THIS CHAPTER KEEP WRITING

PegasusRyderPegasusRyderover 7 years agoAuthor
Not trying to be Barbie

She was not trying to be Barbie, she was simply trying to be someone else other that the woman who had ruined everything. For all she knew she had failed as Barbara, mom and also as Barbie (the sexy playful fun girlfriend).

AllintheheadAllintheheadover 7 years ago
To 10speed

Yes her mindset may not have been "Barbie" but by putting on the wig and dressing like her that was the only difference. The guy in the bar wouldn't have known that. That was all i was pointing out.

To PegasusRyder: please keep up with this story. It's good because it's different. It stays interesting because we never know where you plan to take things next. Ty

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