All Comments on 'Mommy Needs My Help Ch. 03'

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love

GREAT STORY OF A SON'S LOVE FOR HIS MOTHER AND HIS HELP. IS THERE MORE TO THIS STORY?

Redundant at times and clearly need an editor. But it had its moments. ***

The writing quality hardly deserves any score above a 3. There are too many extraordinary stories on literotica that set the bar high. This isn’t one of them. Comparatively, this earns a 2.

Cringed every time I read the word Passed. On ever occasion it was wrongly used. I read all three. You need an editor. The concept is good, but the writing is mediocre. At least your not writing Cuck stories in LW.

TBC

As far as I'm aware, I've used the word "passed" correctly in all three instances. Considering the story is being told "in real time" rather than... In the past. If I'm incorrect here, please explain. I'd like to improve my next piece.

Beautiful flow of words that all mothers and son should experience.

wish there was zero score. too fucking slow boring and repetitive.

finally quit on page 1

I don't like "sex by narrator."

Let those involved describe the sex they are having.

It's so great that mom finally accepted his help!

Very intense John! Thanks for the series.

Jack

Loved it this chapter was much better loved how the sex was brought together waiting on chapter 4 gave it 5 stars