All Comments on 'Mom's Big Bed Ch. 13'

by FOUNTAINPEN67

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Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 2 years ago

Good series. Because I enjoy logically developed stories, for the hell of it, I tried to diagram the family tree. I gave up.

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearalmost 5 years ago
Still upset about Havasu!!!

"Havasu," Mom said, "now let's get some sleep. I don't want anyone to spoil the surprise for you Ian...even YOU - so don't keep asking questions!"

That's the first mention of it being a surprise, the night before the start of spring break. but it's been mentioned for days. If I was Ian I'd still be pissed, he's the Man of the House the only Male of the Coven, he should know what's going on. He should 'put them in their place'!!! If I was him my reply would NOT have been "OK Mom!" it would have been, "well, Mom it's already spoiled, because I made plans with Michelle next week, since no one would tell me I figured I wasn't involved." "And I'm not going to change those plans now it's too late!"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
more more

Great story. Needs to continue.

hardheadd1hardheadd1over 7 years ago
3rd time

Would really love to read more of this one. This is the third time I have read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wonderful

The story needs to continue please

No1holywoodNo1holywoodover 7 years ago

Please do write more to this story. Need to have more with Mitchelle and Havasu.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story!

Yep, it's another 5* performance. Don't want to wait too long for the next installment :)

Rahsaan1Rahsaan1over 7 years ago
BEST STORY EVER

If possible I would give this story 20 stars that's how much I loved this story hope there will be more

SoNaughtySoNaughtyalmost 8 years ago
Hot Story!

Damn! I love your stories so much! They are so hot and very well written! Let me know when you write the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

are u going to be making a new series with havasu

daylilygardenerdaylilygardeneralmost 8 years ago
Very Hot

Well written as always. Keep writing...knowing that you get me wet and horny.

Brittni4uBrittni4ualmost 8 years ago
Hot

Five stars Fountain pen! Keep up the great work. Very descriptive and anyone who loves this genre will love this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More

Will Ian get to fuck all of Kinda's friends along with all of their sisters and moms? I can also see you setting up for a sequel called "The First Family of Porn", where all of Ian's family have porn sites and does pornography along with their swinging with the other oversexed, incestuous families in the Phoenix and each other,

LadyofEroticaLadyofEroticaabout 8 years ago
Hot story

Three generations of incestuous whores, sister, mother, and grandmother. It doesn't get any better than that.

I don't know were he found the stamina for his date (lol).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Please keep them coming

Your stories are good. I especially love this series. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Need BOB!!!

DAMN, your stories keep getting more erotic and exotic.........we need more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Another lovely naughty one.

You are getting naughtier and naughtier. Wonderful.

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Hello everyone... with spring I have several new projects I am completing and a few more in the works. You'll see I am dabbling in short stories like The Chair; Our Stage and Private Box but I also have a few longies in the works. I'm working on chapter four of Lusty Lynn-Sexy...

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