All Comments on 'Mom's Home Alone Ch. 04'

should continue the story.. liked it

This character deserves more stories. She's just what I wish I could have been. I know it's been a long time, but I'd love more stories about her.

The story lacked development regarding both characters and events. But the chapters are short and things happen quickly. So good for short read. In that regard, good job. And you can actually add few more chapters as well if you want. There is certainly room for that.