by black_moth
It would have served the asshole right if she had bitten his cock off. I wonder how he'd like someone to jam a garden hose down his throat and then turn on the water?? He'd probably whine like the selfish little bitch that he is!! Two stars.
for what it is its better written and told better than most the stories lately. that aside i hope you continue the story and dont let the assholes get you down. i do recommend that you either have your stories proof read or get a volunteer editor to help you clean it up. there were'nt many errors, but there were some.
I would have rated 5 stars if it were longer....reached a conclusion.
Well written, good substance.
I liked the story. Also maybe take it down a notch people, a couple of mistakes are not the end of the world.