All Comments on 'Mona's Makeover'

Maybe a sequel, 6 months later?

You built up the story to epic levels, the women transforming into supermodels, tight, toned, and tempestuous. Then, he got home and the story ended. WTF? You built up my hopes, teasing us with lesbian relationships, foreshadowing a mass orgy of sorts culminating in worshipping his completely transformed wife, who would confess her love, adoration, and lust for her husband. ...with room for a lot of woman-woman love on the side. Hell, they were worshipping a picture of his cock...

In my mind, this story was all about being a slow-burn transformation story. There are a million 'living with a beautiful, submissive goddess or two' stories online and there was not much I could think of doing that would add to that particular genre.

If I have any real regrets about this tale, it is that I could have made the transformation even slower and spent more time on her changing mind-set.

The tease...