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All Comments on 'Monday Lunchtime Blues'

by Clansmansco

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
You need a proofreader

Not much more distracting than bad grammar and lack of puncuation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice!

Hey good story, ok maybe a little grammer fixing but still a good

story. You got my vote mate!

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