All Comments on 'Monday Night Swim'

by drdrfor1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
No more

write to other sites

RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAyleover 12 years ago
Very well written and hot story!

Good luck with next week, and be sure to tell us about it.

ps...to Anonymous: Get the hell off this site and get medical help.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
STOP WRITING

THIS IS ONLY FOR SICKOS

BordermanBordermanover 12 years ago
More Please

Love to hear more please and I am not a sicko, just enjoy erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good story

Looking forward to the next install!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
just a guess

either your age is 16 or your I.Q. is 16 or both i'm guessing both.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More to cum

Yes she will, but he may not. Cuck, cuck, cuckold

demantoiddemantoidover 12 years ago
Fun story

Good potential. Weird, a public nude pool run by a local government. I live in the wrong town. Anyway, good luck with the rest of the story doctor doctor.

ErotonautErotonautover 12 years ago
Too slight to have much impact

Ignore the idiots who deliberately read stories in a category they clearly hate, then complain at the results, but this story was both too short and too underdeveloped to have any erotic force. As for your protagonists, the wife is obviously eager to take this new cock out for a test drive, and it appears her husband is turned on by the prospect of watching her screw another guy. Whether he finds the reality as entertaining remains to be seen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

nice idea. looking forward to the next bit. being slowly taken in the pool in front of husband without his knowledge is so horny bit. being slowly taken in the pool in front of husband without his knowledge is so horny

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